Improvement

I believe that throughout the year I got progressivly better. I think i got so much better mainly because I tried to get better. When speaking in the latest speech I didnt say um anywhere near as much as I did the first speech. Also I made way better eye contact with everyone. I think the teaching methods used by Mr.Lunn really worked. I learned to let the silence just be the silence. When i couldnt think of what to say I didnt try to fill it with ums and uhhs. I think I used my hands better in the last video and drawing the audience into my speech.

Goods and Bads HOW TO

I believe this speech was much easier than any other speechs i have done. It was easy because i knew the matieral so well that it was like i was speeking to a friend or teaching. My confidence was much better and i did well looking at all the people. I think i did well keeping my voice loud and explaining things in enough detail but not to much. I think that i had some things to work on though. I said a lot of "um's" and i stuttered alot. There was many things that i was trying to dumb down so people would understand what i was talking about and i wasnt sure if everyone was understanding where i was or were getting lost. Like Mr.Lunn said i lost i think i should have done a better job keeping my audience in tune and my speech more fun.